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ayvee1 wrote:I think you've finally lost the plot Jela.

What?

Jelavic9|RFC wrote:

Cam wrote:Can you start a sentence with 'However'?

Jelavic is a knowledgeable toffee. However Cam is a deluded scouser.

Jelavic is a knowledgeable toffee, however Cam is a deluded scouser.

Shouldnt that be it

Cam wrote:On the first reading, everything he does seems perfectly innocent and he just seems like a polite guest in the house who is taking the time out to talk to the children. However when you read that part again after knowing what he does later on, it has a slightly foreboding or sinister air.

I don't think you can use 'however' to start a sentence in that context.

Cam wrote:On the first reading, everything he does seems perfectly innocent and he just seems like a polite guest in the house who is taking the time out to talk to the children. However when you read that part again after knowing what he does later on, it has a slightly foreboding or sinister air.

Your English skills are terrible. Copy this and put it in your essay.

Upon first reading, the actions of [CHARACTER] appear perfectly innocent, he seems a polite guest, shown by him making the effort to talk to the children. As a result of this behaviour, when one reads this section in the knowledge of [CHARACTER]'s actions later in the text, his actions appear more sinister.

VivaRonaldo wrote:

Jelavic9|RFC wrote:

Jelavic is a knowledgeable toffee. However Cam is a deluded scouser.

Jelavic is a knowledgeable toffee, however Cam is a deluded scouser.

Shouldnt that be it

No, it's completely wrong, to say however, the second clause must be ostensibly contradictory to your first, for example

When first reading his posts, Jelavic appears to be knowledgeable, however upon further examination, it becomes clear he is a complete fucking spastic.

Cam being a deluded scouser has nothing to do with it.

Cam wrote:On the first reading, everything he does seems perfectly innocent and he just seems like a polite guest in the house who is taking the time out to talk to the children. However when you read that part again after knowing what he does later on, it has a slightly foreboding or sinister air.

Yeah, He's defo a scouser

ResurrectionRooney wrote:

Cam wrote:On the first reading, everything he does seems perfectly innocent and he just seems like a polite guest in the house who is taking the time out to talk to the children. However when you read that part again after knowing what he does later on, it has a slightly foreboding or sinister air.

Your English skills are terrible. Copy this and put it in your essay.

Upon first reading, the actions of [CHARACTER] appear perfectly innocent, he seems a polite guest, shown by him making the effort to talk to the children. As a result of this behaviour, when one reads this section in the knowledge of [CHARACTER]'s actions later in the text, his actions appear more sinister.

Hardly, it's just that it's late and i'm tired. Also using 'one' to describe myself is a bit formal.

Cam wrote:

ResurrectionRooney wrote:

Your English skills are terrible. Copy this and put it in your essay.

Upon first reading, the actions of [CHARACTER] appear perfectly innocent, he seems a polite guest, shown by him making the effort to talk to the children. As a result of this behaviour, when one reads this section in the knowledge of [CHARACTER]'s actions later in the text, his actions appear more sinister.

Hardly, it's just that it's late and i'm tired. Also using 'one' to describe myself is a bit formal.

You're writing an essay, it's supposed to be formal. If I was your teacher and you handed that to me I'd set fire to it front of you and throw you out of the school.

ResurrectionRooney wrote:

Cam wrote:

Hardly, it's just that it's late and i'm tired. Also using 'one' to describe myself is a bit formal.

You're writing an essay, it's supposed to be formal. If I was your teacher and you handed that to me I'd set fire to it front of you and throw you out of the school.

Fair enough.

ResurrectionRooney wrote:

Cam wrote:

Hardly, it's just that it's late and i'm tired. Also using 'one' to describe myself is a bit formal.

You're writing an essay, it's supposed to be formal. If I was your teacher and you handed that to me I'd set fire to it front of you and throw you out of the school.

Oh my god.

kyro7 wrote:

ResurrectionRooney wrote:You're writing an essay, it's supposed to be formal. If I was your teacher and you handed that to me I'd set fire to it front of you and throw you out of the school.

Oh my god.

I find it funny how you can laugh tbh.

Use a semicolon.

Cam wrote:

kyro7 wrote:Oh my god.

I find it funny how you can laugh tbh.

Why? Don't turn into a little cunt thinking I'm insulting you, I'm laughing what he said not you.

Fucking prick.

Chill your beans.

Fuck off.

Ok.

Good.

RobbieSavageIsA... wrote:

Prime example of a show that has jumped the shark.

If Kyro had handed that work in, RR would have asked him what the fuck he was doing in school, since he had left about 3 years ago.

Cam wrote:

ResurrectionRooney wrote:You're writing an essay, it's supposed to be formal. If I was your teacher and you handed that to me I'd set fire to it front of you and throw you out of the school.

Fair enough.

Yeah, it is fair enough. Point is, don't write essays when you're fucked, write them when you're feeling fresh, like Cravendale milk, and don't ever hand in anything like that again.

Cam wrote:If Kyro had handed that work in, RR would have asked him what the fuck he was doing in school, since he had left about 3 years ago.

Got upset because I laughed at something. Tit.

Pippo Inzaghi wrote:

RobbieSavageIsA... wrote:

Prime example of a show that has jumped the shark.

It's been cancelled, hasn't it?

kyro7 wrote:

Cam wrote:If Kyro had handed that work in, RR would have asked him what the fuck he was doing in school, since he had left about 3 years ago.

Got upset because I laughed at something. Tit.

I'm not upset, i just think it's funny.

Cam wrote:

Pippo Inzaghi wrote:

Prime example of a show that has jumped the shark.

It's been cancelled, hasn't it?

No, new series has just started.

On the first reading, everything he does seems perfectly innocent, and he just seems like a polite guest in the house who is taking the time out to talk to the children. However, when you read that part again knowing what he does later on, it has a slightly foreboding or sinister air.


That's what I think it should look like.

Cam wrote:If Kyro had handed that work in, RR would have asked him what the fuck he was doing in school, since he had left about 3 years ago.

Was that supposed to be an insult?

Cam wrote:

kyro7 wrote:Got upset because I laughed at something. Tit.

I'm not upset, i just think it's funny.

Why? It's not like I ever had a go at you or your work, you wont find me laughing at people for doing things wrong.. I wont say I'm smarter than people.. I was just laughing at what he said.. he'd burn your work and chuck you out of the school.. it's so over the top it's funny.. but then you took it completely the wrong way and got defensive.

Pippo Inzaghi wrote:

Cam wrote:

It's been cancelled, hasn't it?

No, new series has just started.

Ahh, then it must be the last series.

RobbieSavageIsA... Wanker